Wave 3 / Step 11 of the remediation plan (Phase 1 — usable by a non-author).
The README claimed 'the version that ships is the version that's actually been
independently reviewed' — an overclaim the operator correction flagged: the cold
review is a CAPABILITY the pipeline can run, not a guarantee every shipped edition
received. Reframe to the honest capability:
- Long-Form Engine bullet: the draft CAN be frozen and re-read by reviewers with no
drafting-session context (argument, language, facts, reader-fit) before lock, so a
cold pass catches what the framing-biased in-session gates miss; run inline (Step
6.5) or via /linkedin:headless-review for maximum independence. No claim about what
every shipped edition went through.
- Pipeline diagram annotation '(independent re-read)' -> '(cold, headless)'.
Verify: grep -ni 'independently reviewed' README.md -> no matches.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Kjell Tore Guttormsen
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